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Post by leopardshadow on Jun 6, 2008 21:00:57 GMT -5
hi im a new member im wildpaws friend!
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Post by Wildstar on Jun 7, 2008 0:03:14 GMT -5
Yay! Thanx rockywave! Now............Who gave me the tenth karma...?............
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Post by CookieFur on Jul 4, 2008 17:09:11 GMT -5
Awesome story, you have to continue!!!
I gave u an 11th karma, btw. ;D
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Post by Blackfire......The Dark Flames on Jul 5, 2008 16:18:04 GMT -5
Hang on, I think I'll chage back to Wildpaw, and change my name instead of using a new account! Thanks CookieFur! I will pos more soon and even mke a cover!
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Post by Wildstar on Jul 5, 2008 16:43:22 GMT -5
CookieFur, I have a friend who is obsessed with anime too! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ BTW this has nothing to do with Maximum Ride anymore..........~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Leaving the Silverlake behind in the distance, the four questing cats continued their long and troublesome journey, following the scent trail of the young apprentices' Clan. 'Ow!" Dawnpaw complained as he smacked into a tree. He had been chasing a wandering moth and basically forgotten about everything else. Flyingpaw giggled and padded over to help him up. Dawnpaw grumbled something about trees and walked on ahead, humiliated. Fangpaw rolled his eyes and shook his head, but secretly hiding a fond smile. These two cats were his best and only friends, and he couldn't help liking them. Yewstar limped behind the young apprentices, his whiskers twitching in amusement. Apprentices were so playful and carefree, he just had to like them. They were also the only cats who ever listened to him. He sighed as he thought of YewClan, the Clan where no predators hunted them, where no cat fought with them. But that had all changed when Blackyew came along, with his malicious evilness and his despisement of the Warrior Code and good, honest cats. He just wanted to fight and kill, to destroy and break things. He had broken up his Clan, and now Yewstar was going to bring it back together again, and fight Blackyew once and for all. Hope you like it! I am sorry it was short!
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Minty
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Pount has a new name!
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Post by Minty on Jul 5, 2008 20:57:05 GMT -5
Love it, Fangpaw totally rocks!
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Post by Wildstar on Jul 6, 2008 4:11:11 GMT -5
He's funny, especially how he wants to kill Jaggedstar......hmmm.....
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Post by Icestorm on Jul 7, 2008 13:49:23 GMT -5
Keep going [glow=red,2,300]please![/glow] ;D
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Post by Wildstar on Jul 7, 2008 21:53:12 GMT -5
OK, soon! Just a minute!
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Post by Wildstar on Jul 7, 2008 22:04:52 GMT -5
Ok, that was less than a min, but oh, well. Thanks everyone!
"WWWOOOOWWWW!" exclaimed Flyingpaw, her tail swishing frantically. Fangpaw and Dawnpaw ran to catch up, with Yewstar close behind them. They gasped as what Flyingpaw was so amazed at entered their vision. A deep, bottomless chasm fell in front of them, blocking their way for miles around. As Yewstar leaned closer, he saw a strange, faint light glinting from the middle of the dark chasm. He frowned, and leaned closer. Suddenly there was a deep rumble and the rocks below him gave way. He yowled in terror and his last glimpse was of the apprentices horrified faces, Dawnpaw's front paw stretched out towards him as if trying to reach him. Then there was nothing but darkness.
DAWNPAWS POV.
When Yewstar fell, I felt something in the air, like as if something invisible was creeping up on us. I heard pawsteps before the rocks gave way, and deep crack, as if someone immensley powerful had broken it, on purpose. Then I heard the terrified yowl, and instantly I knew what had happened. The trap was meant for him.
Please comment!
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Minty
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Pount has a new name!
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Post by Minty on Jul 8, 2008 9:58:14 GMT -5
Oh no! Yewstar!! Continue soon!
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Post by Wildstar on Jul 8, 2008 15:33:08 GMT -5
I will, as soon as I come back from town! ) Poor Yewstar! Pssst! Scroll down if you want to read! I won't let Yewstar die! XD
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Post by Redwood on Jul 12, 2008 15:39:27 GMT -5
Hi Wildpaw, my name is Redwood. I'm a new member. Your storys good so far. Makes me want to post my own story.
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Post by Wildstar on Jul 19, 2008 19:38:42 GMT -5
Thanx! Tell me when you have posted a story so I can read it!
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Post by Wildstar on Jul 21, 2008 0:57:34 GMT -5
Seriously, where is everyone............................? sigh
boredness..........ihate it!
App., your brain can read words in any order.....
IF UOY ANC EDAR HIST THNE UYO VHAE PSSEDA HET SETT ANC OUY EADR HITS?
mAN, i CANT READ IT!
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