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Post by Icestorm on Sept 23, 2008 16:05:21 GMT -5
TITLE: Red Fire and White Clouds CHAPTERS: Probably 20 AUTHOR: Icestorm1 PAIRINGS: RockxCherry, CloverxPatch, Tinyx???, Bouncex??? (Bounce and Tiny are secrets... You'll find out soon if you watch closely...) RATING: Hmm... WARNING: Blood and fighting. (What do you expect?) SPOILERS: Read up to Firestar's quest, The New Prophey, and The Dark Journey. SUMMARY: SkyClan has finally found the clans' old home, but danger lurks in every shadow. Enemies block their way, and Rockstar must choose - Go back to the old camp, or fight these dreaded foes? DISCLAIMER: I do not own Warriors, but some characters (Flamestorm, Silverstripe, Nightkit, Sunkit, Snowkit, Barkkit, etc.) I made. BETA: Me Cover: Prolouge coming soon!
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Post by Wildstar on Sept 24, 2008 2:16:51 GMT -5
Yay! The sequel! Plz hurry up prologue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Icestorm on Sept 24, 2008 17:13:53 GMT -5
Ok! Here's the prolouge! PROLOUGE "We seen cats near our territory," a dark colored tom with broken yellow teeth and almost black eyes. He was staring up at a large cat. "Where?" the large white and light brown tom growled, his eyes hidden in his fur. "They have been spotted near the old, dried up riverbed. It's a large group of cats, but they are weak and malnourished." he added. "It will be no problem driving them out." "Have they entered our territory yet?" the large brown tom asked, his voice poisonous and raspy. "No, but it looks like they are heading straight into the territory," he meowed, dipping his head. The brown cat growled. "How long have you seen these cats?" he asked suspiciously. The cat looked up at him. "For a few days. We thought they wou-" The brown cat snarled. "Why didn't you tell me this before?" he hissed furiously. The cat shrunk down. "I-I thought they would leav-" Before he could finish, the brown cat lunged at him. "Traitor!" he snarled, and slashed this claws to the dark cat's throat. He let out a choking cry and fell on the ground, dead. The cats around him looked unmoved, as if they have seen this many times before. "This is what happens to cats that betray BloodClan," he growled to the other cats surrounding him. One elderly cat called to him. "But Fire," she mewed. "What about the group of cats?" He looked up at the old she-cat, his crimson red eyes cold. "As for them," he hissed. "The next time you see them on our territory, kill them." The cats surrounding him let out yowls of support. Fire looked up his blood-red eyes glowing with satisfaction. I have won, he thought. BloodClan is under my control, and no cat will stand in our way.Yeah it's short, but I think that has enough to tell you something...
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Post by Wildstar on Sept 25, 2008 1:38:13 GMT -5
Ooooooh! EVIL! Cool prologue, yeah, I think it is enough to give you the general idea!
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Post by Icestorm on Sept 25, 2008 15:22:39 GMT -5
Yeah. Here's Chapter 1! CHAPTER 1
"I said, what are you doing here?" A snow-white cat snarled in Rockstar's face. He stared at them, surprised that these cats would be so angry with them. As calmly as he could, he walked up to to the aggresive cat. He dipped his head. "Greetings," Rockstar mewed. "We mean no harm. We are just passing though." The white cat growled. "No cat passes through without being killed," she hissed as other cats bristled behind her. Rockstar brisled with unease. These cats were scrawney, but mustles rippled under their belts, and their eyes burned as hot as flames. "You will never pass," the cats behind her hissed and snarled. They moved in closer ranks. Rockstar knew they couldn't a fight while they were this weak. He dipped his head. "We'll leave," he mewed reluctantly. Some burned within him- something that longed to rip these cats apart. A voice seemed to whisper in his ears. Kill them, it said. You have nine lives, and they only have one. But he shook the thought away. Slowly the cats of SkyClan backed away until they were once again hidden in the trees. Once they were safely away from the cats, Cherrytail stared at him, shock in her eyes. "Why'd you let them do that to us?" she growled uneasily. "You should know," he mewed, "That we are too weak to take on these cats. Not yet." Cherrytail stared at him, fire in her eyes, but after a few heartbeats, the fire died, and she nodded in agreement, though she still looked angry. He licked her cheek. "We will pass these cats, just not now." He faced his uneasy cats. "We must get stronger before we face these cats," he meowed. "But from now on, I want a permanant watch. Cherrytail, will you organize that?" She agreed, and the meeting broke apart. A heartbeat later, his sister, Tinywhisker, padded up to him. "You should get some rest," she mewed. "In fact," she added. "We all should." Her fond gaze fell on a cat in the distance. Rockstar strained to see who it was, but before he could, a sensation filled his vision. He saw a group of cats smelling of blood and carrion. They were all surrounding a large brown and white cat. He must be their leader, Rockstar thought. As he looked closer, he saw something about the cat that made a shiver run up and down his spine. The cat's eyes were blood-red. Then the vision faded, and he heard his sister's voice echo in his ears until his scences returned to him. "Rockstar!" she mewed. "What's the matter?" He shook his head. "N-nothing," he mewed, his voice shaking. Tinywhisker gazed at him, her eyes understanding. "You can tell me, you know," she meowed gently. "I will," he promiced. "But..." he looked away to hide the horror in his eyes. "Not now." he finished. She nodded and licked his sholder soothingly. He purred in thanks, and settled down next to his sister. Memories of apprenticeship flooded over him, calming him, until he settled into an unsteady sleep. He found himself in a field. The air reeked of blood and carrion. Suddenly the cats sprung onto him. Anger made him fearless. He shredded his claws into a cats' fur. It screeched and fell down, not getting up. The sensation of anger and longing for blood flowing between his claws overpowered him. He wrestled with every cat until they all layed on the ground, dead. The reek of blood was strangley satisfying. But Rockstar woke up a heartbeat. Horror filled his body. Great StarClan! he thought. What is happening to me?Woo, Scary! Hope you like it!
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Post by Icestorm on Sept 27, 2008 10:40:37 GMT -5
CHAPTER 2 Rockstar shook his head, but he couldn't clear the numbing horror of his dream. he had never had that sensation before. Why should it start now? He recalled how he had killed every cat in anger. He had felt the strangely satisfying sensation of blood running between his claws. He wasn't able to control himself. What if that happened in real life? What if, in the heat of the sensation, he hurt a cat of his own clan? He pushed the thoughts away. He got up and streatched his limbs. Oh I got to go. I'll finish the chapter later. Bye!
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Post by Icestorm on Sept 27, 2008 14:40:40 GMT -5
Srry bout that. Had to finish homework. CHAPTER 2 CONTINUED The clearing they had settled in the day before was bathed in moonlight. All except one cat were asleep. He padded to where the cat sat. He soon realized it was Echosong. She was staring up at the stars, unmoving and unblinking. Rockstar recalled the dream he had when he got his nine lives. He was alone in a cave almost killed by bloody cats. When the cats had gone, he had saw Echosong lying on the floor dead. He shivered. Would something like that really happen to his friend? "Hello Echosong," he mewed as casually as he could. But instead of answering, she just stayed still, staring up at the stars as if she were made of ice. "Echosong?" he meowed a little louder. Slowly she turned to him. She stared, unblinking, her eyes filled with saddness. "Something is coming," she whispered. "Something beyond the control of StarClan." She blinked, some of the awe in her eyes vanishing. "Rockstar... something terrible is coming," she repeated. "I have the same dreams every night. There's one where you and me are in a cave, and we are attacked by cats with the scent of blood and carrion. They come and..." she looked away. "Kill me," she finished. Rockstar, though filled with shock that she had the same dream, licked her shoulder comfortingly. "There's another where I see you in a field. You're surrounded by cats. I think they are the same cats as in the other dream," she mewed, her voice shaking. "They attack you, but instead of them hurting you, you kill every one of them. Blood covers the ground, and your eyes are filled with a savage anger beyond words." Rockstar felt dizzy. Echosong continued. "You lick the blood off your paws, and look at the dead cats around you. You look at them with...satisfaction." she finished. She glanced up at him. "Promice me you'll never be like that," she begged. But Rockstar was too sick to reply. How does she know? He barley even hears the rustle of a bush nearby. But before he can even move, he freezes with fear. Echosong's eyes had turned blood-red! CHAPTER 3 Rockstar gasped. Echosong stared at him, her eyes red. She looked at him, confused, but before she could ask what was the matter, a shadow jumped out of the bushes and pinned her down. Rockstar growled. Forgetting about what Echosong had told him before, he barrled the creature over and pinned it down. It was the cats that had driven them away! Hissing, he bit the cats' shoulder. It let out a yowl of pain and fled into the bushes. Now the clearing was filled with fighting cats. Rockstar jumped on the nearest invader. This was a large white and light brown cat. It yowled. "Cats of BloodClan," he meowed. The cats stopped fighting, and padded towards him. The cat threw Rockstar off. Winded, Rockstar got up and summoned his cats. The brown cat stared at him. It was the one in Rockstar's dream! Its red eyes glowed with ambition. "I have heard you wanted to pass through our territory," he hissed, his voice hard and poisonous. "My name is Fire, and this is my territiory. No cat passes through without being killed." Rockstar stared back at him. "My name is Rockstar," he meowed. "We mean no harm. We are jus--" "Just trying to take our territory?" Fire growled. "No," Rockstar growled impatiently. "We only want to pass." Fire walked up to him until they were nose to nose. Beside him Cherrytail growled, but he silenced her with a flick of his tail. "Like I said before," he hissed. "No cat passes without being killed." Fire stepped back. "You have a quarter moon to leave," he meowed. "If you do not leave, you will be killed." The cats of BloodClan turned around silently and vanished into the bushes. I know, its a little wierd, but I have writers block again. Hope you like it though!
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Post by Wildstar on Sept 27, 2008 19:31:18 GMT -5
cool! =D
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Post by Icestorm1 not a on Sept 27, 2008 22:14:00 GMT -5
Thanx! I know it's a bit of a repeat of The Darkest Hour, but i'll change it up a bit. I already have something in mind...
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Post by Wildstar on Sept 29, 2008 2:07:54 GMT -5
Hmmmmm... DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN! I never really realised it was like the Darkest Hour...it might be just me though!
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Post by Icestorm1 not logged in on Sept 29, 2008 14:22:16 GMT -5
Oh I just meant the battle itself will sort of be like that. But that's alright. The Darkest Hour is cool! ;D
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Post by Wildstar on Sept 29, 2008 15:20:09 GMT -5
Oh. Ok. Lol. Yeah it is apart from when Tigerclaw is killed
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Post by Icestorm on Sept 29, 2008 20:06:13 GMT -5
Yeah. I know some people would like, throw tomatoes at me or something when I say this XD, but without Tigerclaw/star in the first series, the story might (Emphasizing 'might' for all Tigerclaw/star haters!) have been sort of boring. (Apart from battles, forbidden relationships, etc.) I am not saying it would have been boring! I would NEVER say that! It just seems to tie the story in place. If you hate Tigerclaw, please do not take it out on me. *hides behind couch with shield for tomatoes*
LOL sorry about that!!! Okay heres the news: COMING SOON: The Dark Journey Manga. I do not have time to do the whole thing, but I will at least do the prolouge.
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Post by Wildstar on Sept 30, 2008 1:08:18 GMT -5
Yeah, Tigerclaw seemed to like, give the whole story a point! Not so much in the 5th and 6th books, but definitely in the 1st, 2nd and 3rd ones! =D What manga?
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Post by Icestorm1 not logged in on Sept 30, 2008 15:43:45 GMT -5
A manga (Comic) of the Dark Journey. I'll post the first part soon. It shows some little details that weren't in the actual story.
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